Friday, December 21, 2012

I Love My Spouse! Comments

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I have the routine jobs to do,
It is too early for me to burst.
Tiny human have the hope,
They struggle with the dope.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Factual and realistic in thoughts and their presentation! We who have to live a little more have a hope ahead. The sun is our very hope ever and he can`t just mint us.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 22 December 2012

A nice imaginative poem of the Earth speaking to the Sun! The dooms day has doomed! I LOVED THE POEM.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 December 2012

Dope refers to semiconductors, that are the reason for the development in many fields 2. man made hills refers to high rise buildings.3. the spouse refers to the Sun 4. I am the Earth 5. we are still alive after the dooms day! Happy reading and living, Friends!

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