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" We must love one another and die." (Dylan Thomas) And all the Sufis reverberated one thing that is LOVE.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Randhir.
Part-2 LOVE makes all things beautiful, But, LIFE is the biggest Teacher, Experience and Happiness itself... I found everything in my Life and thats what makes me realize today to say that, \'I love my life\'... It is a beautiful philosophical poem nicely executed.10
Part- 1 We must love our lives first. Love makes all things beautiful. It keeps away the agony and hatred. Who doesn't love his life he commits suicide and becomes the vitim of great sin. If we shalln't love ourselves we can't love others. Dear Randhir, you have so astutely and startlingly inscribed this poem. Your experience is right. I cite......
yes this is poetry And you must thank every one who has commented otherwise 'tis a mark of disrespect no one will read you again for a second time mark time I have composed over 15900 poems...but my master poet tells me...its not quantity.. but quality..then i asked him fools read me... over 2000 daily... let me be... Then he said okay be a 'POETree''' bear fruits of all kinds more sweet.. bitter few... i shall not interview nor interfere with you...post all rubbish too.. who am i to control you none can control vomit...but then I said some flies and fleas...survive on vomit too... you want me to starve them O MASTER TELL ME WILL YOU...HE became silent... then vamoosed he had fused diffused and now lies in refuse
The Title itself is Beautiful in deep and in Essence! No Qualms of lines! ! 1`000++
A beautiful poem. Indeed love should be our first priority; none else and that's loving for everyone and thing.
Charity begins at home. You can give what you don't have. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Sylva-Onyema Uba
Montik Sir my Greetings from India. I am so impressed by your kind feedback. Well, how? I don't know..its something you need to feel what life has to offer. We hardly cherish tiny things. Those little things made me feel the biggest man and a lover of life. Life loves the liver of it. And thus enjoying it. Thanks much for your question. Please stay connected. With respect.
and let them know..loved every line of Staunch strength from with in! ! Thank you for sharing! ..and how?
Deep thank you to Gary, Chettiar and Mehta Sir for your kind words. I am honoured by such praises. Love.
so nice.. good wordings...10 Patience in Oh lovely female too And very true Lover for love and liking That is most striking “Life is teacher” As you puts with views stronger It is better We learn it sooner • Randhir….. name
I am overwhelmed by your kind words dear Sir. Thank you so much. Your every word means a lot to me. Today I am feeling that I have influenced at least one by my simple write. I am honoured. Wishes.
That's so nice of you to read my poem Sir..Thank you for your appreciation.
LIFE is the biggest Teacher, Experience and Happiness.... I'm agree with u.... nice poem
That's very nice to give a beautiful quotation. Many thanks C.P Sharma for your kind review.
Oh, The real magic of Love can only happen to change her, They realized, Oh, This would be fair to say that she found the only feel of LOVE, Relaization how a real experience of love can change a life.tony