I Love My Daddy (Age16) Comments

Beautiful piece. Wrote just enough to make people think. Ignore the negative, you are brave to post something that's meant to disturb a persons sense of security and to face an issue that nearly everyone is afraid to face.

Very controversial but with great insight, you must have some background knowledge of the effects of sexual abuse. It is shocking and sickening to read and thats why you've had the negative comments. However, I do believe this subject should be publicised more as people hiding away from the truth and becoming complicit makes this abuse even more rife. Absolutely Brilliant!

eerrr... Laura whateva enspired u 2 think o these things u ned 2 thinkabout ritin somethin a little more HAPPY and BOUNCY

A sickness in the pit of my stomach is what i was left with when i read this poem. This poem glorifies sexual abuse and incest. Victims need support and comfort not vile words like this.

further from my own life, excelent.

Amen Grayham! If all of society shy's away from important issues like this how can people who have experienced events like this be expected to keep on living after?

Come live in the real world Agata

A subject not only society but you should shy away from

to derek germain: you ask how could she have written this if it didnt happen to her? you underestimate the power of the imagination, dude. if you could only write of what you experience, we wouldnt have as much to write about now would we? just something to think about..

i like the way you pulled this off, a horrible subject but it does bring to attention the fact that some who has been repeatly abused could feel like this. have you heard of the stockholm syndrome? well done for addressing a subject society likes to shy away from graham

As tasteless as it is disgusting I can't imagine that anyone would feel this way about such an action, sexual abuse happens but the fault lies with the abuser and the victim wouldn't feel that way about you insult all the people whose lives have been torn apart by this action with this tasteless verse that you call poetry

I LOVE MY DADDY MORE! he touches from behind :) it is really nice, have u got any more like this? i want to give one to my dad to show him how i feel about him. I am publishing poems soon :) please read them. Will ur daddy love me?

to Poetry Hound... u only need to put something once dude, and it's poetry... does it need a point? ? ?

i dont know how i managed to write it, the ideas just came to my head so i put them down, i realise its quite sick but so what! ! ! I f any of this had really happened to me at 16 i doubt i'd put it in a poem at 17!

intense. thats cool how you made a sequal to the first peom

How could you write a poem like this, if it didn't happen?

OK, so sexual abuse happens. What's your point?

OK, so sexual abuse happens. What's your point?