I Love Me Some Cherries Comments

Love and dreams! ! With these wings to fly! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Hmm? This is my 2nd or 3rd fav of yours- so I say-please keep up your writings. They are inspiring, fun, light hearted and soul-filled...and who, I ask you? , other than one person, apparently, doesn't like them some cherries! ! ! Lolo! (ps. I like your Peter Pan poem the best so far!) Thanks for your personality, grammar, etc...Gio M

Midnight, hmmm…some ESL errors here that detract from the poem (leaving out articles, misspelling its) . Maybe start reading good contemporary poets in English? Your writing won't improve until you study some good examples, poets like AI or Mary Oliver or Donald Hall... if you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks. Yrs, JC