Thursday, March 8, 2012

I Love Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Love is a drug for me
She mends all the broken heart in a holding hand
She made me fell in a great addiction of passion
She smiles like the welcoming gate of heaven
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Faris Arshad
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Faris Arshad 24 March 2012

thank you all of my friends in poemhunter all of your comments will help me to be a better poet thank you so much

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Fox Tail 22 March 2012

This was a beatiful poem Mr. or Ms. Arshad. I'm glad that you decided to post such words like these on this website and support you for your future rhymes. I hope that you will start posting more poems of truth and inner thoughts. -Fox_TaIL-

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Gemma Unyereno 21 March 2012

It's a very good poem. A quick knote, the line She mends all the broken heart in a holding hand is grammatically incorrect. Other than that it was great!

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

THE POEM CALM MY MIND AND GIVES A PLEASURE TO MY SOUL…………………………………. THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’

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