Saturday, December 5, 2009

I Love Love! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love love,
It makes me look at the past with a smile
It makes me live the present with a style
It makes me dream for the future
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Masked lady
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 14 December 2009

how nicely and how simply you put it. marks 10. shan

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 December 2009

Life becomes an easy task, Without wearing a mask................ heart yet needs love for the sway to swing by soul passion when engrosses upon for the gleams of love, yet it riffles for rainbow to paint art of life by colors to trudge upon path of joy and sorrow of undulation, wonderful write through ingenuity, passionate yet evocative,10+++, thanks for sharingf

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poulas edward 05 December 2009

Yes this is the poem and that is the will, wear not mask, and the will you have achieved. Fly high with your heart full of joy, shame and fame are always there to treat us, money and praise are always there to come, but never the love for one whom you loved a lot. Love him fully, keep undernearth let it be krish, radha who ever, be smile smile smile. That is what I want to achieve. And I succeeded in the event through your poem. This is the day I have waited for.

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