Monday, November 9, 2015

I Love Cyclone! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I slept so deep and sound
In the morning, saw a sight profound
How do I describe, well what do I say
For before me stretched the Bengal Bay
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Shankaran Kutty
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Jaishree Nair 10 November 2015

The oncoming of a cyclone so well penned I enjoyed the word play and the rhyme is superbly articulated. Thanks

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Shankaran Kutty 11 November 2015

Thanks Jaishree..

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Shakil Ahmed 10 November 2015

well composed poem, beautiful rhyming, thanks for sharing

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Rajnish Manga 10 November 2015

This is like reading a running commentary of your itinerary on a rainy day which not only broke your monotony but also made you go out to enjoy some of the most incredible things. Great work. Thanks. I quote: The newspaper boy came in a boat / As a little rat used a ladle as float

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Seema Jayaraman 10 November 2015

Awesome write and well rhymed, cyclone warnings and typical Chennai settings..loved reading, thanks for sharing

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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015

Wonderfully written poem, I liked it..........10+++

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