Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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Rating: 5.0

I love and hate this time of year
The damp, the cold, the drawing near
Of frost returning o'er the stones,
The chill enveloping my bones,
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John Carter Brown
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Denis Mair 05 March 2024

Very skillful. This reminds me of John Clare's descriptions of nature.

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Mihaela Pirjol 22 July 2014

A lovely poem about seasons, with great rhyme and rhythm.I enjoyed reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 22 October 2013

All seasons are nice. I enjoy the changing of seasons. Heat in summer cold in winter and the in between. lovely write by the poet

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Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Excellent rhyming with sentiments of substance!

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Joseph Anderson 19 September 2013

It might be plain and simple, but it is plainly beautiful.You built in much image of thought throughout. This would make great song and those last two lines would be great in refrain or chorus

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Olugbenga Ayoola 13 September 2013

sincerely u decide award about dis particular poem, d metre of dis poem is meaningful, and every line end Rytm with each other, i giv u 10+++

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Lorraine Colon 11 September 2013

Very nice poem. Just when I've had enough of one season, it changes. I look forward to them all.

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Mary Forrester 11 September 2013

A lovely poem John, enjoyed the read.

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Noreen Carden 11 September 2013

Hello John this is a lovely poem with great description s of all the seasons

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