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i think it`s a fantastic poem. rather the whole World in it. u named all the things every normal man needs to have and feel in his life

WOW! ! ...this is a beautiful poem...keep up the marvellous work Man :) :)

Ah Jim - -this is your warm heart speaking out and it comes over as that - a piece of prose which depicts how you observe life and delight in what you see from your poetic window..... a charming vers....10

that's a pretty interesting poem i liked it

haha thts was sweet good write