Saturday, May 16, 2009

I Lost You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I said I'd never lose you,
just one little thing went wrong.

Just save me from this little game.
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Candice Rastede
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Surya . 07 June 2009

sensitive and touching poem posted10 surya

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Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

Sometimes those little things become big things

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2009

love is a funny game Candice...at times you find you are thrown out into a pool of no water...good write...the lines there bring out well the disappointment and sorrow and the pain inside...10

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Vikash Kumar 16 May 2009

You have expressed very well in very simple words...Emotions are flowing in all the words...Keep it up

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Vikash Kumar 16 May 2009

You have expressed very well in very simple words...Emotions are flowing in all the words...Keep it up

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