I Lost You Comments

nice style and thoughts... sad yet so lovely expressed love and despair in most touching thoughts.. 10++ Lovelots, Maia

Vaibhav jii, May god bless you. Do run your pen and use more your brain there are so many longing to read more and more from you.

lovely poem vaibhav! love will surely come your way, like a wave in the heart.best wishes. ritty

Perhaps you lost your love because you didn't realize, but perhaps you will find another just as beautiful. I particularly liked the rhyming couplet a the end of the last two stanzas. Great poem. 10 Karin Anderson

Nothing is ever lost until you lose Hope. Learn to grow wings then my dear friend!

NIce, , , in short words u described ur deisre...i kindly liked it..keep it up

Hold on and a girl as exquisite as your poetry will find you.A wonderful poem of requite love and longing.Loved it.a 10

poignant pen, Vaibhav. Sound imagery

Well strange are the ways of the lord hope he has a plan for you and a better gal as well :))

This is a very well written and expressive poem, Vaibhav, and it displays an acute understanding of the fickleness of love and life quite well. We all have been in a similar situation, and somtimes being too timid to act, lose an opportunity that we often regret the rest of our lives. This poem expresses that melancholy feeling far better than I have seen in such similar poems. Carl.

a lovely piece, my dear..try not to lost her again. because you are more than worthy. Hugs, Meggie

sometimes life's lessons come by in a harsh manner but so much to learn from them..nothing is lost...

Sad, but with beauty style.10/10

the lost would be found too....an amasing low tone there bringing out the emotional failiure

Touching poem. I feel this is the right tone to be used for broken-heart poetry. Very well composed.

a wonderful confession, rarely possible in lovelorn battle.

poignant poem...if love is not worth it and not meant to be surely you'll lost though it hurts in return...10

the losing of a love is something we all fear, but we can't turn our back and despair for love will come to us all- if we accept that fact and don't let yourself fall. a great write, and you're getting better with every write. a ten

When love is lost there is always a reason, I suppose, but sometimes I think there is no one that really knows why. One just has to move on. Nice imagery, a fine read. Richard

A beautiful self-consoling poem with a positive note. CP