I Lost My Way Comments

A very good revelation indeed. Inspirational poem. Tfs

bon appétit

I'm guessing the 'new kingdom' was a neighbor's backyard family cookout. You were smeling hamburgers and skewered 'veggies' cooking on a grill. : ) bri

By the eed by end of 6th line, It sounds like the fragrance was noticed...but then line 8 speaks of beginning to smell it. Hmm?

....but definitions are not without variety/differences for the same word. Do you know what I mean... It can be useful OR annoying.

. When I think of 'pitch dark' I think of 'no light', so it sounds 'funny' to me to read of an area of pitch darkness as being 'the darkest region'

Towards a new kingdom, Where the bright sun would shine at its best.....Wonderfully inspiring! ...10..10

Yes, how often we keep ignoring the positive indications and keep ourselves engaged in futile things. Your poem ends on positive note as always. Full ****

Beautifully done....5 stars

Another mysteriously powerfully inspiring poem! Love it, Anjandev!

your patience and positivity would certainly lead u to a new kingdom. Beautiful.

Part 2. Nice poetry. Enjoyed reading. Top score.

" mysterious fragrance…" the enigma that is life, the power of nature, the instincts of human beings …. A believer can call this power "God"…

Courage and persistence will lead us to success. A very inspiring write.

Lovely write! Well done x