I lOST MY IDENTITY
Believe me! I lost entity of my own shadow
When I followed shadows of so - called greats.
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Nice expression with beautiful words, thank you poet.
A very good and thought provoking poem. We become a composite of many big and small personalities before realizing that none actually belongs to us. Our own self is simply a reflective mirror holding layers of perceptions for us to choose from. Congratulations for member poem place and thanks for sharing it.
It is always good to find yourself and know exactly who you are.
Please stop being negative, and dwell as deep as possible, with the guidance of a teacher, you will soon enough discover who you are. Very much thought provoking. Congrats for being the member's PoD.
tulsi, i relate to this poem. it reminds me of a bumper sticker i like which says be yourself. everyone else is taken. all the best to you. glen kappy
For all what you've mentioned; I have to say, good job when Jesus turns up to rectify!
Imitation creates shadows and identity is blurred.Life is meaningful if you live as it comes to you. A very good lyric. To understand self gratifies inner hunger.
Marvelous...at some stage in life every one gets this thought ...who am I? and He? ...an interesting introspective poem...thank you- 10++++
Searching myself! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A nicely crafted poem with a philosophical undertones seeking self-discovery. Thanks. I quote: I'm searching myself inside me But not capable to find out yet.
No two fingerprints are identical..... Excellent poem.... congrats on being selected....
need to visualise myself inside me To establish myself as an unique me......yes, one must visualize himself or herself inside him or her.Beautiful ideology. A great poem shared. Congratu lation for this poem as a poem of the day.
It is indeed a great poem.Congratulations for poem of the day.Every individual has his own identity and an inner cry to see it distinctively.But it may be shadowed by the so called greats.The pain of lost identity and cry to establish own image so marvelously portrayed in this poem- - - - - I gaze at my own plain mirror I can't find reflection of mine. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I need to preserve my fresh image To ensure my own precious identity.
Congratulations for having this fine poem chosen as member poem of the day! Well done!
I don't think you lost your identity, you are exploring in life and we as human beings oft tend to look at the best and famous personalities of the wolrd, like Hitler (your poem) as the most powerful man, everyone was afraid of him, till he commtted suicide because he lost the war, like Jesus (your poem) the highest Almighty with no sins at all, indeed we tend to be the utmost best but the experience in life make our mind change, maturitygives the clue