Wednesday, August 12, 2009

I Lost My Heart To You..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was standing still under the sun,
until u came & altered my season...
I was fallen out of place,
until i saw your cheerful face....
...
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Neha Aradhye
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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 02 January 2015

Interesting language...

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

Ever since I met such a mystique, I found myself complete.. Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 24 August 2009

What can be more beautiful in this world than two young entwined souls who love each other with special feelings of love....the poem is wonderful.........10+++

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Siddharth Singh 24 August 2009

Its not only a poem, it sounds like a love song too. Very nice.

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Dhanesh Aradhye 19 August 2009

'Some tender wish to cherish...' such a beautiful line.... dis poem is very tender.. n realy graceful.......... keep writing dear.........

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 13 August 2009

Nice expression of love.

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you are lucky to have him, nice read

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Pink Butterfly ... 12 August 2009

sooo sweet! ! ! Keep it up! It flows so gracefully.... -Pink Butterfly-

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Neha Aradhye

Neha Aradhye

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