Sunday, June 23, 2013

I Lost A Lovely Dream Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh, somewhere in the deep, dark night,
I lost a lovely dream -
It drifted through my sleeping hours,
Just like a sparkling stream.
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Valerie Dohren
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Lawerence Mize 17 August 2014

Great poem Val. I love reading your poems.

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Amitava Sur 24 June 2014

A beautiful poem describing the full satisfaction of mind during being in that dream and forgetting all pains during that time. I wish you have several dreams like thisone in days to come.

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John Brown 17 July 2013

A lovely poem Val. I've lost a few myself.

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Claudia Krizay 11 July 2013

Very beautiful poem, Valerie- -Claudia

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Yasmin Khan 11 July 2013

Lovely dream described in lovely rhymes and images and how good that you could recall it.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 July 2013

Excellently composed, loved the meter and the rhyme, content and smooth flow, and the delightful images.

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Smoky Hoss 04 July 2013

Surely one of the best poems I've yet read; speaks deeply to my soul. A favorite indeed!

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Meena Mustafa 02 July 2013

OMG! such a fine write Val. I really enjoy reading your poems :) Thank you

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Sandra Feldman 29 June 2013

Your poems are like fine lace, All tinged with emotion Beauty and grace

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Hans Vr 29 June 2013

Very enjoyable. The sweet dream, fading from our memory. Yet we know it was there Perhaps something like the place we were before we were born

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2013

Such a awesome dream! With amazing lines so delicate and floats so serenely!

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

a beautiful dream fading so quickly. nice write

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Sandra Feldman 26 June 2013

Always hits, no misses, That's dreamy in itself. Sorry about the other one. S.

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A sweet experience sweetly conveyed.

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Danny Draper 25 June 2013

An elegant and well formed poem with a simple theme of a personal and confounding matter and tight lyrical meter.

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Joseph Anderson 24 June 2013

And you found a lovely poem. An absolute beauty and certainly a 10. Now comes the code

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Kevin Halls 24 June 2013

Why do the best dreams vanish quickly on waking, but the bad one's remain for hours? Probably down to guilt! Nice one Val.

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Lucifera Santez 24 June 2013

oh nerve racking..............................

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Kavya . 24 June 2013

a lovely poem too.............

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Angel Lacanfora 23 June 2013

Very nice, I enjoyed it!

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