Oh, somewhere in the deep, dark night,
I lost a lovely dream -
It drifted through my sleeping hours,
Just like a sparkling stream.
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A beautiful poem describing the full satisfaction of mind during being in that dream and forgetting all pains during that time. I wish you have several dreams like thisone in days to come.
Lovely dream described in lovely rhymes and images and how good that you could recall it.
Excellently composed, loved the meter and the rhyme, content and smooth flow, and the delightful images.
Surely one of the best poems I've yet read; speaks deeply to my soul. A favorite indeed!
OMG! such a fine write Val. I really enjoy reading your poems :) Thank you
Your poems are like fine lace, All tinged with emotion Beauty and grace
Very enjoyable. The sweet dream, fading from our memory. Yet we know it was there Perhaps something like the place we were before we were born
Such a awesome dream! With amazing lines so delicate and floats so serenely!
Always hits, no misses, That's dreamy in itself. Sorry about the other one. S.
An elegant and well formed poem with a simple theme of a personal and confounding matter and tight lyrical meter.
And you found a lovely poem. An absolute beauty and certainly a 10. Now comes the code
Why do the best dreams vanish quickly on waking, but the bad one's remain for hours? Probably down to guilt! Nice one Val.
Great poem Val. I love reading your poems.