Tuesday, August 2, 2016

I Lost A Dream Comments

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I lost a dream in my dream
that you my friend far to be seen
I wander and wander in the dream
to find you my friend fade to dim
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Anne Yun
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Daniel Brick 21 September 2016

This is remarkable. The dream must be the kind psychologists call LUCID DREAMING when the dreamer is aware of dreaming and can to a degree shape the dream. It is your efforts to find a lost soul which is so admirable; the fact you can't find this person is an issue of Fate. You've done your part, your heart is in the right place.

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Ernest Makuakua 04 August 2016

beautifully written Anne nice work

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Gajanan Mishra 02 August 2016

wander and wander in the dream, good one

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