I lost my first thought in the morning
I lost my prayer in the night
I lost the only joy of living
I lost the direction of my life
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Simple, profound, complete. You managed to weave the lines with rhyme and keep the idea intact, with a powerful last line that marvelously wraps up the whole poem. Excellent! 10+
oh so sad...well, soon you will recover...great cogitations....10
profound. simple yet it gets to you emotionally. astig