Tuesday, December 1, 2009

I Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lost my first thought in the morning
I lost my prayer in the night
I lost the only joy of living
I lost the direction of my life
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Robert Uy
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Ayieneiya 14 January 2010

profound. simple yet it gets to you emotionally. astig

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 December 2009

Simple, profound, complete. You managed to weave the lines with rhyme and keep the idea intact, with a powerful last line that marvelously wraps up the whole poem. Excellent! 10+

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Ency Bearis 01 December 2009

oh so sad...well, soon you will recover...great cogitations....10

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