Saturday, November 3, 2007

I Look Into The Dark Night Sky And See You. Comments

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I look into the dark night sky and see you.
I look at the glistening moon, and I see you.
I look into the gentle lake, and see your reflection.
I look at the gleaming stars and see your eyes.
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Kezune Walker
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Effie Yalena Steyn 09 January 2008

Beautiful and touching. I especially like the line 'wishing you were real' for its incongruity with the rest of the poem. The love you speak about seems so solid I dont understand how it can not be about someone real? ? ? Great poem. Effie xx

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Tristan Scully 06 December 2007

Woah... that's amazing!

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