Tuesday, July 14, 2009

I Look Into My Wonders... Comments

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I see two people from where I am. One is a male, one is a female. Early aged couple... I would say that their early twenties. I think they are in love. They are happy in their words and jesters. Laughter in the air...Love amongst it somewhere...
As I further watch with anticipation, My mind wonders.

Love so sweet, Like the smell of a gardinia on a warm summer day.
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Lorene Erwin
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Siddharth Singh 15 July 2009

That you have written a lovely piece, is no wonder.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 July 2009

look into my wonders I loved the color that love brought! I look into my thoughts I loved the sound that love brought.................... art of love dazzles on the rungs of cascade yet we rave up by its song painting with colors.......eloquent exposition of love as it flows by the life, wrought ingenious by metaphors and imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Lorene Erwin

Lorene Erwin

Birmingham, Alabama
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