Wednesday, October 25, 2006

I Look Forward To A Next Time Comments

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i look forward to a next time
but if that should never happen
i would be content with passion's memory.
for what has love to do with lust?
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moon batchelder
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Original Unknown Girl 30 October 2006

What a fabulous poem Moon, very thought-provoking! Also a deeper feeling of yearning in these words, I love how you've woven them together. HG: -) xxx

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nn mn 25 October 2006

I look forward to your next poem! Nicely done!

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moon batchelder

bemidji, minnesota
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