Tuesday, August 8, 2017

I Long To Get Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

An intense ache,
a longing inside me
Not for a dream or person
but to immerse myself
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Nidhi Agrawal
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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2017

I reminds me of an old movie song: जा कर कहीं खो जाऊं मैं नींद आए और सो जाऊं मैं दुनिया मुझे ढूंढे मगर मेरा निशां कोई न हो ऐ दिल मुझे ऐसी जगह ले चल जहां कोई न हो

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2017

The mysticism resounding in the poem overwhelms the reader. A philosophy nicely presented. Thanks.

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Nidhi Agrawal 09 August 2017

Thanks. The song you have chosen exactly matches the poem.

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Rini Shibu 09 August 2017

Poem reflecting your crying heart.. Strong emotions.. ++10 You may like my poem: Deep pain

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Nidhi Agrawal 09 August 2017

I'm glad you could relate to it rini. Thanks for reading.

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