I Long To Climb Comments

it took me three or four readings of this line: And I will not deny, to understand its meaning. now i get it. nice rhyming. i especially enjoyed dimpled winds and stroke a comet's tail. and i like your use of punctuation! thanks for sharing. you've inspired me! bri :) ================================= Bri's Longings I long to have a pizza pie. Give it to me; don't ask why. I long for a hot fudge sundae. Give it to me though it's Monday. I long to have my cake and eat it too. Give me cookies and pastry topped with goo. If you don't give me all for that I'm now asking, I'll then cause you to do multiple tasking. You'll have to massage both my feet, 'cause I've not gotten EACH treat. And do give me all your money; it's almost sweet as honey.

A very well described poem with all sweet longings. Wish that you may achieve them..... very nice You may read my poem (I like)

I am so amazed by this poem! I LOVE stumbling across a work or a poet that simply takes me away. Thank you! I'm not prone to giving a poem a 10...but I had too...so well derserving

What a wondrous use of words, I miss....iip