Original Urdu Poem by Faiz Ahmed Faiz
English Translation by Rajnish Manga
इंग्लिश भावानुवाद रजनीश मंगा द्वारा
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mera ilm aapney jaga diya gallion mein toe maien bheee ghooma fariyaad kartey thei dost mere galiyon mein app na ghooma karaein logh pathar na marein faiz tere poetry aaj padkar dilll uchall gaya poet thei kabheee aap jaisey tubh aaj kahan hain is jahan mein abh chppay rustum bhe hain
Yeh dekh kar dil khush hua ki aap itni achhi Hindi likh sakte hain. Kubsurat review ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
Wonderful irony in the original of a well-know Urdu poet and equally so in Hindi, As I suggested also earlier, you would do a very useful service to those who would like to know Urdu well, if you try and give meanings of some Urdu words in HIndi/English. Of course you have given bhavanuvaad which helps to an extent. Thank you.
Thanks for the feedback, Aniruddha ji. I have noted your suggestion and will give the meaning of uncommon Urdu words in future.
Walking around! ! Desire to go around. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
And the Hindi Translation is Superb! Hat's off Rajnish ji.......10
Kindly note that Faiz sahab wrote this poem in Urdu which I have partially reproduced in three scripts- Urdu, Roman and Devnagari. I did its English translation which appears in the opening part.
Excellent poem Rajnish ji! To be able to breath freely in your country, to be able to walk down your street with your head held high without fear, is the greatest gift that a man can enjoy during his life time. I can feel the pain and anguish of this Urdu Poet Faiz Ahmed in his beautiful poem.
It is clear that you have thoroughly understood the spirit of the original poem by Faiz sahab. This is an amazing review of the poem. Thank a lot, Geeta ji.
Well penned. The message is clear. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.
Original Urdu Poem written by Faiz Ahmed Faiz us beautifully and excellently translated by your kind self. Responsibility for safety is must. Thank you very much for sharing this.10
Thank you very much, Kumarmani ji. The original poem is much larger. I have taken some of the initial lines which, I am sure, retain the spirit of the whole poem.
Though i haven't read much of Faiz's poetry but i have really enjoyed reading this translation by you. Thanks for sharing. You have done a great job.