Friday, April 16, 2010

I'Ll Watch As You Burn Comments

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Yes you heard me right.
I said I'll die watching you burn in my arms, suffocating on a combo of tears and death.
But they pulled me away from you, as you body was creamated.
I couldn't cry for you, because it was all a dream. 
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Adrian Cordova
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Rachel Brewer 28 July 2010

This is a really nice poem, The ending is very sweet, i think, you living your life for someone else. It's very sad and moving at the same time. Xxxx

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