I'll think of u every day
U'll be a part of my heart
I'll see from your eyes our glowy way
&your words 'll teach me how you're smart.
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this is really expressive...but why is that sad ending, , , why wont the lovers ever meet again? ? ...but this piece is wonderfull! ! ! good work :)
I'll feel your emotions wherever you are Of happiness or sadness, fear or confusion But I feel that you're one of my dreams which r far I feel that finding u again is like the illusion. a good poem with sweet lines like up... meanigful and rich poem 10+++++++
Good poem Zeinab...so romantic..so lovely.....keep it up friend.Merna
i don't have even a friend...........anyway your poem is stunning.......and i wish i can see you personally.
this is a beautiful poem with love in your heart..ryhming of words are good, , grace
lovely love wording! heartfelt! 10+