Friday, June 26, 2009

I'Ll Think Of You Comments

Rating: 4.0

As I go to sleep, I'll think of you -
The things we've done, the things we'll do -
And my dreams of you will last and love will stay-
though the slumber hours, until the light of day.
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david lessard
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Maya Hanson 05 April 2014

Amazing! ! ! I read it three times just for the sake of reading, keep writing!

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Dean Bottomley 03 April 2014

A beautiful sentiment beautifully expressed

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 April 2014

very nice.beautifully done.liked it.

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Zhaleh Hour 02 April 2013

Nice feeling! just I didn't get the 'why' in the last line? Thanks

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Leslie Philibert 02 April 2013

Nice write, romantic and well written

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Leslie Philibert 02 April 2013

romantic, not new, but written well

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Gajanan Mishra 02 April 2013

deep within your loving heart. I like it. thanks.

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Amber Rose 02 April 2012

My favorite part is the ending. I love this poem. :)

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Besa Dede 02 April 2012

This poem is so beautifully executed. All the yearning that one feels for the loved one, though they are away from each other, it can be felt throughout the entire lines of the poem. Simply beautiful ~Besa

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 April 2012

Lovely poem! So smooth and well written!

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Patricia Gale 10 July 2009

Beautiful piece David, simply beautiful

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Nandhini .... 26 June 2009

Absolutely beautiful....10++

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Sandra Martyres 26 June 2009

A lovely romantic poem David coming straight from the heart..

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