Saturday, January 15, 2011

I'Ll Sit There Speechless Comments

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I look straight into your eyes
And I see the ring of green.
I dance 'round in it
As if it were a meadow's grass coated with dew.
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Joseph Wraithbone
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Caitlin Walczyk 16 January 2011

Great poem- two thumbs up. Imagery is fantastic, good similies, and overall good message.

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