Monday, February 9, 2009

I'Ll Noo Take Half Comments

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I’ll noo take half

Half of anything is no use to me
Give me it all
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Original Unknown Girl 13 February 2009

Lovely sentiments in this poem. I'm not a half-measures person either! ! Like it. HG: -) xx

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Cherry Sha 09 February 2009

Lovely poem we all should try to have it all

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Fay Slimm 09 February 2009

This is so well thought through and argued from the first with clarity - - the end line too contained a nice surprise for the reader...... thanks and a 10 Jim.... from Fay.

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

You don't do things by halves then James? Except share your pillow, good write, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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