Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Wednesday, September 12, 2012

I'Ll Never Forget The Tears Comments

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On those days of too much saidness
that split my heart into two pieces
i stood and watch you wave 'goodbye'
I tried wiping all those tears in your face,
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 21 September 2012

That moment cuts like a knife through a heart, no matter how many times you've crossed that bridge, when ever you need to cross it, its always like a first time....I just hope you will keep your promise of not forget that you left someone behind, you opened a floodgate of tears...excellent poem my chomi! Siya_! !

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Neela Nath Das 17 September 2012

The sadness and the conflict within are portrayed with vividness. As you are always, a master of word-picture, this poem is no exception.

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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