Monday, December 28, 2015

I'll Marry The Nurse Comments

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The hand of friendship was offered
The hand of friendship was slapped away
The trajectory of the spurned
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Raj Dronamraju
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Chinedu Dike 04 August 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings - movingly and passionately penned. Thanks for sharing, Raj.

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Prabir Gayen 10 April 2019

I've always wanted to exclaim With outrage on my side " This time you've gone too far! " Instead I'll make new friends Invite myself to new social situations And I'll marry the nurse... ..... very fine idea and beautiful poem too.

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 03 July 2018

Excellent poem. Such a good poetry......10+ You may like to read my poems and express your views too...... - Sheikh Shadi Marjan

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2016

When I'm old and sick and you leave me on my own And in the care of others so you can enjoy your good health I'll make do with what I have And I'll marry the nurse........ at the point of a breaking up and depressive mood and losing the beloved, you hve to come to a practical decision....... thank you very much dear poet. very fine poem.... liked it very much.tony

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