Thursday, November 5, 2009

I’ll Just Be Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Translucent colours whirl around my mind
forming small pictures that I turn into rhyme.
Some can be funny and others sad,
some speak of growing love
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David Harris
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Tsira Goge 05 November 2009

you’ll never know what to expect because one day I maybe a baby just pushing the age of three or I could be an old man just turned a hundred and three and then again if you are lucky I’ll just be me. - An amazing jump to century... Who does not want be lucky, David, fine poem..10x10... All the best, Tsira

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Janell Cressman 05 November 2009

awesome poem! ! ! ! good one, loved it so much! ! ! !

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Carol Gall 05 November 2009

love to meet all of you and your moods 10

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Jacob Morgan 05 November 2009

really good great choice of words please try som'er my poems i think u just might like em

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Patti Masterman 05 November 2009

David, I feel as if you'd written this just for me. It perfectly describes how I feel, never knowing if I will be me or some character from history. Sometimes I feel a moment of terror waking up that I'm not exactly sure who I am today, lol. Love the free spirited feel of the words.

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