Friday, September 27, 2013

I'll Hear You Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll hear you cry.....If not right now
I'll hear you cry.....Believe this somehow
I'll hear you cry.....Let the tears fall
Let this river flow...Release this pain...release it all
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Lyn Paul
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Piyush Dey 06 August 2014

very inspiring and refreshing write. i like it. well written, dear poet.

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Kanav Justa 09 November 2013

... really a nice poem... there always is a way... well said

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Amitava Sur 31 October 2013

What a penning Lun, Exprssing the pain along with volunteering to share the same... no words.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 October 2013

Nice and soothing to all in dispair. Poem with beautiful words. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 01 October 2013

Beautiful words Lyn - words I need right now. Well done.

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Hazel Durham 30 September 2013

When the dark moments of our lives become too much our loved ones will see us through it! This write is full of humanity and love supreme!

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Abhishek Mishra 30 September 2013

A lovely poem indeed..10/10 is all I can rate it: -)

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Valsa George 29 September 2013

When life appears a blind alley, believe that there is a way out! This simple approach at consolation has greater power than volumes of words uttered in vain to relieve one of his/her grief laden heart!

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Danny Draper 28 September 2013

A strong declaration of dedication with loyalty and love.

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Heather Wilkins 28 September 2013

lovely expressions of love. I will hear you cry you are loved so much it's not time to die.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 September 2013

Assurance of love, understanding and compassion, that's so beautiful! 10/10. And thanks for the note.

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