Friday, May 22, 2009

I'Ll Give Myself For Your Happiness Comments

Rating: 3.4

I can't fight up the tears of your face,
I can't let them grow,
I can't let you down,
I can't fight your pain.
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Ana Z. M.
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Oliver Coleman 02 June 2009

Letting go is hard, I can see where you are coming from and you have an abundance of feeling, very nice job

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

I tell you what Ana poetry is about expressing yourself.....just let the emotions fflow through your pen and a beautiful poem will be made...and you v expressed yourself well here...thanks..yes it is a lovely..cute phrase indeed 10+++ regards shan

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Tiffany Fawcett 31 May 2009

I liked. It wasn't the best but it was a really good idea. Be more descriptive. Mor expressive in choosing your words. Thanks for asking to me comment. PLease do the same for me.

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Meggie Gultiano 31 May 2009

this is so lovely and a cute poem

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Angel Jimenez 22 May 2009

An your poems are very sincere.....you express ALL your feelings in your poems. lovely poems! ! ! 10+

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