I'Ll Give It All To You Comments

Very nice.Love can happen to anyone, at any time.Liked it.

this is a great poem

This is a very great poem. I think a way to improve it would be when you ask a question, you shouldnt have the answer right there, maybe give an example of why it's yes or no. Because it makes the reader think less if you give a straight answer like yes or no. But you are very talented, continue to write, you will only get better! ! :)