Saturday, June 20, 2009

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'I'll give you the moon at night

I'll give you star that lights your eyes
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Emancipation Planz 20 June 2009

Krystal, I wonder if you 'read' your poems out aloud when you outpour them: I'll give you starS that light() your eyes (s) Give yourself the opportunity to do so.... you will 'catch' the music of your word flow... BTW.. the poem IS 'the simplicity of love'...

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