Thursday, November 12, 2015

I'll Get My Act Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll get my act together,
Putting my life in tranquility;
I'll behold the nature in order,
Watching the birds up in a tree.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Avid Fan 03 May 2019

A splendid poem, sir Bernard.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2018

I will make my mind see The positive point of view; I'll let my emotions feel The peace of the lane so blue.........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem with positive view and peace so nicely executed.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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