When I wake in early morn,
Each time the day is new.
I thank the Lord that you were born,
As I'll die loving you.
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Beautifully conceived and nicely crafted with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate.
Most most emotional poem sir.....I love my mother.....Mother is the gift by the God........
stunning, touching words you have conveyed. it often seems when we are in love that one would die loving the other person and then so many yrs go by and another comes along and changes everything. loved the write, very powerful and filled with raw emotions.
you tell so much bout love its great i wish i could have that
This has to be one of the most beautiful things I've read in a while. Your writing is simply lovely.
Man.... 'GREAT'. Again, I really like your style. This would be great in a book!
'When I take my final rest, This day, if life is through; I'll thank the Lord I lived so blessed That I died loving you.' wow...just don't know what to say...very beautiful... Hataw
really nice poem and very much loving....its full of nice expressiond and feeling.really nice creation
I'LL DIE LOVING YOU...such a wonderful love expressed in this poem.. .one and true love...ETERNAL LOVE.... how sweet and divine are the words...engraved in my mind and heart as i read along with the written lines... lines that would captivate the eyes of the reader... words and thoughts enough to melt a heart...even a heart made of steel.... 10++++
i smiled the whole time reading this poem, it's a 100! it was utterly amazing! ! ! ~Love Hazel G.E
I really liked that poem nice job! It's very sweet glad to read it!
What could i say about this except its awesome composition....Congrats!
awww..i LOVE this poem. its perfect and your wording is great, and explains the true devotion to loving another you truly care for. i love the line 'i died loving you.' just as much as this: Till death do us part you'll always be in my heart good job.10+
i love this poem... i love the way you write, it feels like im seeing into ur heart reading this poem...i love these lines it made a perfect ending When I take my final rest, This day, if life is through; I'll thank the Lord I lived so blessed That I died loving you.
wonderful poem, it like a morning melody i guess the one u love if she read it she will die loving true passions rhymed well
nice and great feelings........ well me too i will die reading your poems keep it up layla
Great love poem! And powerful emotion of love.