Tuesday, June 23, 2015

I'Ll Die Forever With You... Comments

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Oh! My love, if I get your sorrow,
I swear to you, I'll become better....and become beautiful.

if you give me this gift, I 'll say no to all other...happiness of life...
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Kinyua Karanja 23 June 2015

A good poem, it create a real mood of love and i can feel the sincerity of the persona. Keep it there for a good job.

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Avinash Patra

Avinash Patra

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