I'll Change For You Comments

The melodic voice, through emotional and honest journey of words here really make this poem sounds so compact of honesty and love. What a beautiful heart you have Dave. Hope all of u are fine now and will always enjoy life together.

I can see the shadows Of our past But I can't see the future Without you I know i'm not the perfect man I know i'm not the perfect son But maybe it's the only way I know how to love But stand by me my love And i'll change for you WOW! Extraordinary! Sir i invite u yo some of my poems.. I just love this Write up!

What a beautiful and moving poem! ! -CAK

Its amazing how some people find it so hard to show they LOVE and others find it as easily as breathing. Im adding this one to my favs. THANKYOU!

Very passonate. A great write and very real. Thanks for the invite =)

But stand by me my love And i'll change for you I can see the shadows Of our past But I can't see the future Without you I love these lines! So romantic. How could she stand not to be by your side? Nice write.

Great POem! I loved the flow of the words and use of repitition :) Alot of passion in the words.

such passion presented here...smiles

This poem is beautiful. I love it. It is by far one of my favorite poems from this site. You have a trully unique technique, and it is amazing. The poem reaches out nad touches the hearts of the people that read it. You have true talent, and I love it. Please keep it up, your poerty is great.

Oh this one really bring something beautiful, a worth read..You have great poem collections and this one could be one of my favorite of your works... Sincere write always create magic! Keep it up Dave _Unwritten Soul

Wow, that was very touching and heartfelt that so may people can relate to....

I wrote my comment into a poem for you 'Times Of Transition' and referenced your poem. Warmest Regards Terence :)

I can see the shadows Of our past But i can't see the future Without you Times of transition are painful and difficult, saying too much, not enough, the wrong thing, or even the right thing at the wrong time. Even without trying we are changing as life circumstances change us. An attempt to become our greatest potential is a course we must chart, ever attempt to follow. Best wishes Terence.

Very heartfelt..did she ever get to read this?