! I'Ll Carry You With Me ! Comments

very touching......................10

Great rythm and rhyme Linda it flows well all the way through. it has to be no less than a 10/10 thanks for the read. Regards Dave T

Linda this one comes from a place of acceptance and unconditional love. The poem flows like peaceful stream and the colors of your words sparkle in the sunlight. I think D major would be the perfect key for this one. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

There is such beauty in the simplicity here, U write as Elizabeth Barrett Browning writes, you are so clear and a joy to read!

Midnight...your best work is well in progress, these past few weeks...Perhaps if i too take a 6 month sabatical from locating a pen....i'll finally find a publisher...and i can hang up my marketing tap-dancing shoes! Your command of capturing the poetic essence of passion, and poignance is stunning, Nurse Ori! If you become famous, remember that it was me who let you sit back & poetically vegetate for 6 months! lol! ! ! fjr **