Wednesday, October 8, 2008

((I'Ll Break You)) Comments

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I have the utmost obsession
In my heart you are ultimate
I will bend you to your knees
To extract the love that I crave
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Naidz Ladia 16 December 2008

love has many colors...love has many faces...love has diff directions, , , , but the entire poem is nice..very nice..magandang araw kababayan..

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Raj Arumugam 07 November 2008

That's a very powerful and realistic portrait of obsessive love - and expressed with such apt vigor

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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