Hi. I read your poem. The first sanza was really great. The lover and beloved should make eachother perfect beings. They should be one (Like John Donne's poems) . The relationship between them is sweet. I hope it would be lifelong. Best wishes.
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Hi. I read your poem. The first sanza was really great. The lover and beloved should make eachother perfect beings. They should be one (Like John Donne's poems) . The relationship between them is sweet. I hope it would be lifelong. Best wishes.