Saturday, July 5, 2014

I'Ll Be Your Ears Comments

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I'll be your ears
you be my eyes
I'll be your sound
you be my sight
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Maya Hanson
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Sina Farajzadeh 06 July 2014

Hi. I read your poem. The first sanza was really great. The lover and beloved should make eachother perfect beings. They should be one (Like John Donne's poems) . The relationship between them is sweet. I hope it would be lifelong. Best wishes.

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