** I'Ll Be With You All My Life - A Song Comments

so sensetive! I Love it

Quite pleasant poem but certainly not a song far too long...there is a song department on this site and if you read some it may help song writing is very specialised like Strangers in the night...not easy regards

Yes, it is most like a song. And if you write a single line thousand times ''I love you'', thats flavour will be the same as musical as it now. But be careful about emotional break down, sometime it happens in crude reality. Keep strength within to combat evil forces which obstruct the way to attain love.10 Regards, pranab