Friday, August 14, 2009

I'Ll Be Waiting For You..... Comments

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My heart was gliding like an young colt,
and I couldn't be stopped even by the thunder bolt.
The day I waited for all my life was there,
and my heart's gonna find it's solemate today......
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*Shalimar ~ Mageswary* 22 August 2009

its very lovely and impressive good hopes and honest keep it up

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Shilesha Johnson 20 August 2009

Years passed by but I didn't shook, I may be lost, but my soul couldn't, every twinkling night it goes and sits, hoping with a little hope that it'll return.. But the adieu was kept long, & the hope was just hoping to hope a sweet heart.... Every night, every twinkling night, every year, it just sits with a hoping tearful heart.... i love those two stanzas.. beautiful poem.. i can relate to this poem so much.. i'm still waiting as well :) ... wonderful WONDERFUL write.. definitely a 10 for me!

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