Saturday, March 17, 2018

I'll Be The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ill be the wind, the wind that soothes your soul to bring a smile upon,
ill be the wind which bends away from the mountain tops, ill adjust my sails just to get where you are.

Ill be the wind that cross the deepest oceans kissing the waters just to burn down the fire in your heart.
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COMMENTS
Donnie Wolff 28 November 2018

That's a very interesting and beautifully spoken though written poem Zion Anisius.

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Joseph Wolfe 15 October 2018

I like the idea of being the wind. Excellent write.

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Naila Rais 02 April 2018

Such a nice write.... Deserves 10 +++... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE and In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila 👍👍😃

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Bri Edwards 19 March 2018

i like it. to MyPoemList. but where are the apostrophes in all the I'll entries [[ and in one ill entry which looks like the synonym of sick ]]? ? . there IS an apostrophe in the title. maybe PH has been 'up to no good', erasing the apostrophes? PH does do some strange things. and in your sixth line you left out be. bri ;)

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