I'Ll Be The One Comments

wonderful lyric poem, so well conceived..thank you for sharing

it's a nice poem; you promise so much though and it is not always possible to be there..Do read my poem, 'You and I'

Hello again Rohit, Just finished reading your poems from your Number 1 entry to Number 10 entry. It reads like a love come true and from the heart. So I hope all is still true and real. Very good poetry and will come back again to read some more of your poetry. You are a lovely husband for your lovely wife and she must look forward when you write of your love for her. Beautiful!

i always admire those who can write with rhyme...

It's always a wonderful thing when you know you have some there to rely upon, and who will never give up on you. You are a very reliable person, thanks for sharing... Marina Gasbey...

A lovely poem, indicated a loving mood and search for the wholesomenss of a true love. But love sometimes is cruel, there is conflict, there is debate, only maturity and containing with patience and persistence would make it grow well.

I do not usually read rhyming poems, yet I found that this to be sincere and expressive.

Words come across honestly

Such a beautiful poem, those caring n loving, just love it

The journey of love... one complimenting the other through all of lifes emotions. Beautifully written; D

Hi Rohit, A very dear and sentimental poem that strikes the chords of everyone's heart-strings. I think almost everyone would like to be loved like this because to love and be loved in equal measure is the greatest feeling. The rolling flow of this poem is very good and the tender moments make this seem like it just came out of you in a moment of bliss, as you were encased in your own love, this makes it everso sweet and catchy. It is easy to read and is just a lovely poem. Well done you and whomever she is, I am sure she is lucky. Dale :)

so romantic to be written..you must take cinema as your hobby...good job thanks for sharing

i love it its sooo sweet

i love the flow in this poem you are a great writer. i love this poem. keep up the good work. xoxoxoxo ellie

You are a very good person.

like the way the poem flows assuring the loved one that he would never let the love between them ever fail.. this work does emohasize on the most important ingredient of an ever lastion relationship- building trust.. also the way it convinces about their immortal love is indeed a great work.. nice write

Again a heart taking poem........ Just loved it... no other words to say..... God bless

this is an amazing poem..i truly wish i could write as beautiful as you

Hello Rohit, sorry i'm telling you that i'm out of sugar in my house so could u borrow me your words because it sweet enough to replace sugar and no to cause diabetes! lol joking again friend...I did laugh a while when u said i'll drink all your tears...yach! tear is salty to drink, i dont know if other tears are sweet, kidding again...i know what u mean is ' give unto me your suffering'..Again u are bringing a good poem for us...keep writing

I have to say, that would be a very lucky girl indeed! Beautiful words, and romantic feel. Your words are like a dream. Thankyou so much again for sharing.... Marina....