Rewrite of New Kids On The Block I'll Be Loving You Forever
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A beautiful sonorous piece elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, Ramona.
Deep feelings, brilliantly presented. Wonderful lyrics….great poem of the day. Congratulations, Ramona.
The card added here is striking and uplifting for most women, I reckon. Well composed and an excellent song poem
Beautiful song and so up-to-date. Most women don't dare to do that, but you do. That shows a strong character and less love for the man you loved. So sorry to say that, because you have left him, or is this just a song imaginatively? However I wish to say Congratulations to you for being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! A 10+++++
This is a tour de force, Ramona. A brilliant recasting of that song! When poetry comes close to song I love it best. Well done on a richly deserved poem of the day.
I amn't that kind of girl Who will take a broken heart So guess I'm gonna have to leave Now that your lies have Driven us apart.........so touching with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being choosen as the poem of the day.
Ramona, such a well composed song... congrats for being chosen...10++++
Lies shatter Trust. Cheating shatters Trust. Two good reasons for leavin'
Now that your lies have Driven us apart The very thought of staying with you now means That my everything would go down under.... love its complications and mysteries very well portrayed my dear poetess. thank u. tony
interesting cause of leaving - So guess I'm gonna have to leave Now that your lies have Driven us apart nice lyrical poem
This is greatness!