I'Ll Be Back Mama. Comments

Before you leave, You felt what your mother will feel And you left with tears. You're good son You are blessed By your mother, You’ll always to be praised Because, You felt what she would feel.

i like it so much! the emotion is crying out loud! it seems i don't know! this too perfect for 10!

It echoes your cry throughout the universe. Emotions are so high tempered it touches the reader to cry for your departing. Fight and keep promise poet. Apoet

a balanced diet did you say - and mama i'll be back, after i get the balanced diet. Quite deep and inviting, a whole book here. mark

nice poem life is always a search the flow is good keep it up best of luck