Tuesday, May 29, 2012

I'Ll Be Around Comments

Rating: 5.0

i'll be around...
in the wind that rustles your curtains,
in the whisper of darkness that taunts the moonlight.
in the silence that roars, and is then still...
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Eric Cockrell
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Unwritten Soul 30 May 2012

Wow....long one with strongest structure, wisdom and words....the way you arrange the poem, the way you see the world and the way your mind travel others, it such a warming one, a divine journey we want see all..I'll be around for u, and to listen to all your advices_Unwritten Soul

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Neela Nath Das 29 May 2012

When a person departs this world, nothing ends.His wishes, honesty, his love for this earthly life, nature, ...... everything remains.Divine!

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Heather Wilson 29 May 2012

A wonderful descriptive poem,

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Dave Walker 29 May 2012

L ike a wondering soul that see's everything, a great poem.

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Patti Masterman 29 May 2012

There's a lot of living still goin on in this poem. ;)

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Pheko Motaung 29 May 2012

Fantastic! Such a wonderful masterpiece from the depth of your soul! Thanks

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