Friday, July 11, 2014

I Live Like A Dog Comments

Rating: 5.0

UP out of the slime of human existence
I live like a DOG without resistance

I see, hear, smell and sense what is NOW
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Chuy Amante
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2019

Of human existence! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 01 May 2019

Great poem! I have read it several times, but had to come back and read it again!

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2018

(cont.) (cont.) p.s. you state that you have senses greater than some of those of frog (my ma was a frog) , a Man (my pa was a man) , or a cow (my first wife was a cow (she may still be; i DO miss the fresh milk!) , BUT.. you seem to portray yourself as a human. are you a Woman? ?

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Kim Barney 01 May 2019

Miss the fresh milk! Ha! You are such a cut-up, Bri!

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2018

(cont.) i guess Poem by is 'doing' a 'play on words' **, or is it a pun? ** a humorous use of a word with more than one meaning or that sounds like another word poem's topic is love. i wonder if it is love, like many of Is It Poetry's topics is green i.e. some word to satisfy PH's requirement for a topic. hmm? bri ;) (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2018

(cont.) ....Ruff is my life, but ruff has several meaings/uses other than: look here: Woof is the most common representation in the English language for this sound, especially for large dogs. Other transliterations include the onomatopoeic wuff, ruff, arf, au au, borf, bork, bow-wow, and, for small dogs, yip. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2018

(cont.) .....and if you were holding a sign saying: Please help. Anything will do., i know at least one (not me) who would say Why doesn't s/he get a job? ok, homeless or not, you are a gifted poet/humorist [[like me! ]]. or is it like I? ha ha. some favorite lines: Some might say my talk is Bow-Wow // i sayARG...I MEAN ARF to that! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2018

Rex, before i forget.......[this dog sometimes forgets; how, bow wow, 'bout YOU? ]...... this poem for the dogs goes to MyPoemList. insane? well, you sound like a person many (other people, including me) might see walking down Main St. and then think to themselves: Homeless. i wonder if he ever washes his hands? (cont.)

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Red Soul 29 June 2018

An absolutely beautiful poem. It makes us laugh and think. Wonderfully done. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Richard Wlodarski 15 January 2018

Hilarious! And profound! All rolled up into one big, juicy doggie bag! I'll be laughing the rest of the day! And probably in my sleep! Thoroughly enjoyed it! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 19 February 2017

Extremely Cute! ! ! ! ! This Is So Wonderfully Done! ! ! ! A True Poet, So Wondrously Sung! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many Many! ! ! ! ! ! 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++

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Rod Mendieta 14 December 2016

Hah! This one really made me laugh out loud and then stop and think about the profoundness of it all. Priceless!

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Manonton Dalan 12 March 2016

hehehehehehehehe....my dog always jumps for good hug

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Rosie Bourget 08 January 2016

Some dogs are better off than human beings.

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Melvina Germain 08 November 2015

Very interesting, food for thought and we move forward doing the best we can.....

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2015

Different thoughts, different style, its really a different poem, simply wonderful.

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Kim Barney 07 November 2015

Love this poem. I see that I already left a comment last February. Well, it was certainly worth reading again.

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2015

Lovely poem depicting the essence of taking things and situations in stride, a well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with beautiful rhyme scheme. Definitely a good piece written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Agape. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 October 2015

Verily, an amusing one, Loved reading and commenting it.

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Mannah Shekh 04 October 2015

Just enjoy your poem.. Love it.... Thank you..

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Kelly Kurt 11 September 2015

You have a wonderful mind and sense of humor. I hope nothing changes that

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